Close Yet Far Away

This is done using a black ballpoint pen. It's my first time ever doing something like this, I know there are a lot of mistakes here and there but I'm glad that I got to finish it in time.

An entry for *ladyrapid's Black and White contest [link] .

I only started this about a week ago, which I soon learnt to be a bad decision since I was already busy with upcoming test and project due this week. I almost can't believe that I made the deadline date.
Critiques and comments are welcome